No need for a helmet, I asked for a honest reply and appreciate it.

I spent over 2 hours with the various tries of fixing it and I rather scrap it and draw it anew before I waste any more on more feeble tries. T'is what they say, there are at least 100 bad pages in everyone and you can't prevent it. Boy, I'm just glad that I didn't draw Eloya's carriage and his guards on the street, I would have been so pi**ed to scrap something complicated like that.
The thing is it isn't a real bird's perspective, especially since Sinnon is only 30 cm tall (and standing, his wings are not moving). That's why I squat down on an actual stair and took that photo with my hubbie and a manikin, and it looks like in my drawing very muchly. (Would show the photo, but hubbie wasn't dressed adequately.

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The very first image I had in mind was to show Eloya up front and zoom up the stairs with Sinnon in the background. I didn't use that idea because Eloya leaves the scene and I didn't want the reader "to go with him". (And I drew his face so often already.) So I made Sinnon the main focus and failed. I think I'll go back to the initial idea instead of drawing it from the side and mess up again. Leave the complicated stuff for days when I don't draw like a noob.

Yeehaw, I'm so good. ^^ 6 pages in a week, and I even started the next remake. (Got half of it corrected.) But gawd, I'm tired. Worked on Seekers for 13 1/2 hours today, and yesterday wasn't any less. Guess I will work on it for ~2 hours more before I go to bed. I think that's what the whole March will look like for me. I hope it's worth it and the anniversary will be nice.
No idea how I cut it, happened sometime yesterday evening and it hurts pretty much. Maybe when I fiddled around in the gerbil cage. I'd prefer if it was the left thumb. *gives it an evil stare*